a) get rid of the intro
b) fix the grammar and spelling
c) please get rid of the music that autostarts on every page: first of all, it's annoying even to a computer/music guy like me, and also, it may even suggest (subconsciously perhaps) to the client that this is the quality of music he'll hear at the event!
d) stop all the movement of text (marquees) and color-changing of links; it reminds me of christmas in times square.
e) don't use the Sonic Sound logo behind the scrolling text -- too hard to read
f) allow your pages to resize and word wrap accordingly for smaller windows -- many users still use 800 x 600 px monitors and they'd have to scroll left and right all day to read your text
g) on your price quote page, I wouldn't include your discounts for charity or military; make a discreet offer instead -- those who aren't in those categories shouldn't know.
h) do you really charge $100 more to come in tuxedo?? I've never seen that before.
i) most importantly, the article you've printed (hopefully with Wolfie's permission) at
http://sonicsound.biz/Djworth.html completely contradicts the price quotes you give -- as low as $350 - $400 for four hours. Either raise your rates tremendously to match the point of the article or ditch the article.
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